Hi Ekamjot, What an interesting story about ants and chocolate. I like it that you are experimenting with using punctuation.Read some of your sentences again to see if they make sense.
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Hi Ekamjot, What an interesting story about ants and chocolate. I like it that you are experimenting with using punctuation.Read some of your sentences again to see if they make sense.
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